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Moka Akashiya by Paskiz

Hello~ I'm UnitedBrothers and I will be doing a critique for you today! ^_^

Alright. Let's begin. First I would like to say that I love Moka! She is just adorable! Everything seems to be in the right places and the coloring was done wonderfully. Especially in the hair.

But the hair is actually not the right color. See, when Moka changes, her hair turns white, but I still love how the hair turned out. The two lines under the eyes do make it look like she has bags under her eyes, but I know they aren't.

All and all, this a wonderful piece and I hope I get to see more!
The Artist thought this was FAIR
5 out of 5 deviants thought this was fair.


Paskiz Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for taking time to critique my work :) I truly appreciate it^^

Oh youre right, the hair should be actually white :icononionfacepalmplz:
I was not sure so I just took a look at a dvd box and there it seemed like it was very light purple ^^'
Oh well at least its still looks like Moka XD
Onii-chan93 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hahaha it's fine. It still looks wonderful.
Paskiz Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much :hug:
Onii-chan93 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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