Hello~ I'm UnitedBrothers and I will be doing a critique for you today! ^_^
Alright. Let's begin. First I would like to say that I love Moka! She is just adorable! Everything seems to be in the right places and the coloring was done wonderfully. Especially in the hair.
But the hair is actually not the right color. See, when Moka changes, her hair turns white, but I still love how the hair turned out. The two lines under the eyes do make it look like she has bags under her eyes, but I know they aren't.
All and all, this a wonderful piece and I hope I get to see more!