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Human eye drawing by Onii-chan93 Human eye drawing by Onii-chan93
I wanted to get back to traditional drawings and decided to go with the human eye. This is the first time I've ever drawn in this style, but I think it turned out pretty well.

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:iconmoostie1:
There isn't enough eyelashes on the bottom part of the eye, the eyelid is too low on the eye and the eyebrow should be more thick where it attatches to the nose. Try doing more shading on the inside of the eye around the edges and think about making the line of the nose less curvy and less distinct. I like what you have done iris but it is actually more large on the eyeball in real life. Good job adding the area at theleft side of the eye! Most people forget about that! Try making it a little smaller though. Try adding more shading. 10/10 for effort! Good job and keep improving! :D
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There is something about how you drew this eye that makes it look more like a cartoon drawing and not realistic. The eyebrow looks scribbled in, not well worked on. Look at this eye and you can see the difference. You shoudl draw more eyes and then see how they come out, I think it might be the pupil. Keep trying but I don't think you put enough effort into this. I try going on youtube and seeing how they draw realitic eyes, it actually helped me improve a lot better than before. You should try it, I am sure it will work. :) [link]
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A7XFan666 Featured By Owner May 31, 2013
Amazing :3
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Onii-chan93 Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks :3
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A7XFan666 Featured By Owner May 31, 2013
Welcome :3
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Onii-chan93 Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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A7XFan666 Featured By Owner May 31, 2013
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Onii-chan93 Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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A7XFan666 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013
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Onii-chan93 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD
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kizume55 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice Nii san!!! ^3^
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Onii-chan93 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks Kizume! X3
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